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Shmossy

Age/Gender: n/a, Male

I'm planning on making a big Flash animation, 20 minutes in length! But I figured I should try and make a sprite movie, because I love Super Mario so much. Although you can probably tell that by all the pictures of him xD

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Sign-Up Date:
5/5/07

Level: 9
Aura: Light

Rank: Town Watch
Blams: 56
Saves: 74
Rank #: 43,971

Whistle Status: Garbage

Exp. Points: 820 / 900
Exp. Rank #: 36,234
Voting Pow.: 5.13 votes

BBS Posts: 544 (1.15 per day)
Flash Reviews: 87
Music Reviews: 60
Trophies: 0
Stickers: 0

Latest Flash Reviews

87 Reviews | 24 w/ Responses

Score: 3
Pointless Platformer

"I really don't like this game."

date: 3 hours ago

Glitches nearly EVERYWHERE, and poor quality collision detection. I jump near a platform and there's like an invisible wall an inch or two away.
The jokes... they were a nice touch, but nothing special.
It's not exactly hard to slap in a few jokes here and there.

Basically it's a mess in my opinion.
It would be nice if it had smooth gameplay and excellent coding like Fancy Pants Adventure, but this is just...
Ugh.

If you're new to actionscript then don't go making a platformer, or at least try to put some effort in.
Also, your age is not an excuse. 15 is most certainly old enough to make a decent game.
It all looks rushed and scribbled. Basically I think it doesn't deserve to have a score above 2.00, but whatever.
I know it's meant to be a joke, but take that away and all you have is a glitchy, poorly made little game.

Try harder on other submissions. You have some potential, so try to put your artistic talent to good use.
I'll be watching out for more stuff from you.

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Score: 10
Shore Siege!

"Excellent."

submission: Shore Siege!
date: August 6, 2008

Really good graphics and fun gameplay is a winning combo, so great work.
This has managed to entertain me for ages, so a sequel would be really awesome.
Top notch.

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Score: 3
Fire Storm

"Doesn't quite "make the grade" yet."

submission: Fire Storm
date: August 4, 2008

I agree with GDave for the most part.
I would suggest that you make the workspace bigger and the planes a lot smaller next time.
Increase the framerate, add more enemy types and weapon types, plus a boss battle or two, and you'll have a high-scoring game.

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Latest Audio Reviews

60 Reviews | 24 w/ Responses

Score: 10
ParagonX9 - Chaoz Impact

"Kickass."

date: June 20, 2008

I'm not just saying this because you're ParagonX, but oh god this track is just SO amazing.
10 stars as always.
I don't know how you manage it, but all your songs are incredible.

You're one of a kind, and I hope you make many more tracks for all of us to enjoy.

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Score: 8
Solus- TD (Jump Drive Mix)

"A good song."

date: June 2, 2008

I love the voice in this, and it's a good song overall, but it just seems like there's something missing from it.
I wouldn't say this is one of your best tracks of all time, but it certainly is good.
I think this is worth an 8.

All power to jump-drive!
;)

June 3, 2008

Author's Response:

In all honesty, this track wasn't really expected to be mega-awesome.

More like "I was bored so I decided to do something different."

The voice was the main inspiration for it :D

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Score: 8
Solus- Synthesis26

"Unique!"

submission: Solus- Synthesis26
date: May 16, 2008

Interesting little tune you've got here.
It's unique and original, which is a plus - and it's rather catchy too.
This could be used in a Flash platformer type game IMO.

I bet I'm gonna be humming this all day; damn you!
Doo roo doo roo dooo doo do, roo rooooooo!

May 17, 2008

Author's Response:

It is a very catchy tune. :D

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