Shmossy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[S1E13-Prof. Manure's Call]

Bad job

Nothing made sense, the voice acting wasn't great - it sounded too childish and stupid, also the clay was dirty, and the animation wasn't good either.

mattuiop responds:

I will improve clay!
thanks anyway

[How To Animate Walking]

Teaches it incorrectly

The walking looks stompy and unrealistic - the leg goes up too high, and it looks wrong. You are teaching it incorrectly. However, you explained it well enough, and it was presented well, so 7/10.

[The wtf story 2]

Not good

The graphics weren't done well, and it wasn't even funny. Not at all. I don't know how something like this can recieve votes over 3/10, but I guess some people find this type of stuff funny.

[A Wizard Creates]

Very good.

The concept of this was great, and the animation was superb.
The art was also decent.
But one problem - it was too short. I would have loved it to be longer, as it was pleasing to the eye, because the animation flowed well and it was a unique idea.
Good job.
Faved.

[i just farted]

Hmm

If you find that funny, you must be a very young, immature child.
Animation was bad, graphics were bad, but hey, that's what being in the CC is about, right?

[Talking Arabian Cat]

Pretty cool

ammarz you are a moron - he's not making fun of arabs, he said that he was doing this as lip syncing practice. Now grow a brain and get rid of that cocky attitude.

Anyway, I like the style, and the background was good, so all in all it was pretty fine.

[Stick man vs Animator]

Meh

In Animator vs Animation the Animation used stuff like the keyframes to bombard the mouse. It also had the layout of flash right there, not just a white space.
I think it wasn't a decent tribute, and wasn't original, but you tried.
I think it's worthy of more than 1/10 though.

[rocklee vs sasuke]

Not good.

Like most noob sprite movies, it had almost no sound, the music wasn't fitting, and it just ended abruptly. You have a LOT to learn.

thedo12 responds:

I know its preety crappy but im keeping it up here just to see how much ive improved and im not gonna use sprites anymore

[ELEMENTAL]

Nice

It was pretty cool, the plot wasn't too original, but you defenitly have potential in there. It seemed a bit noobish at first, but you really put effort into it, unlike some flash artists. To be honest, I enjoyed watching this flash. Not quite good enough for an 8 - you have some "refining" to do, but I am looking forward to the next one. It could do with some compressing, though. Google "how to compress a flash movie".

[There she is!! step 2]

Whoaa!

This is a fantastic piece of work. I am honoured to review it!